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Rewrites tutorials/01-setup.md against the house voice: active voice, one idea per sentence, filler and hedges cut, and the agent-vs-chatbot definition said once instead of twice.

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  • Watch walkthrough: dropped "most complete end-to-end" / "all the way"; split into short sentences.
  • Overview: "is designed to aid the adoption of" → "helps the lab adopt".
  • Overview / Tools: removed the duplicated agent-vs-chatbot definition — Overview keeps the distinction, Tools states what an agent does.
  • How it works: "is not a single thing — it is a stack" → "is a stack of three layers".
  • Provider / Model: cut "and serves", cut "actually".
  • Combinations: "Different combinations have different implications" → "Combinations differ in privacy and cost".
  • Note: trimmed repetition ("on your interactions… on OpenRouter before use").

Prose only — no changes to frontmatter, the video embed, links, or images. Model example names (Opus 4.5 etc.) left as-is; that's a content accuracy call, not style.

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jaymoore-research and others added 2 commits July 3, 2026 10:16
Rewrite 01-setup.md against the house voice: active voice, one idea
per sentence, cut filler and hedges, remove the duplicated
agent-vs-chatbot definition.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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